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en y u’re r ady t e it, rst r ady ad t e e e fl say o t l ud. is c n h lp y u’r u c ur eck t e e e fl ow o y ur
i eas a d m ke s kes re e erything m kes s nse, a w a ll a a w a low y u t c tch a y g aring e rors o s r
t pos. y u c n, int i o t, w ll.
y t b a h p nest a d o d p jective a h p ssible w en y u r ur urs read y ur e urse say, d o d p t y urself i n
s meone e se’s s oes. es t es e e e say “ ork?” D es t es e ch s ntence m ke s nse? A e y u
f llowing g ammar r les? D y ur s ntences fl ow a d s und n tural? A e y u
f ur u s icking t t e
w rd l mit? A e y u s u s ur owing, owing e t t lling—meaning, e y u s u s ur owing, owing e amples t at p ove y ur
t esis, o posed t j st t lling y ur
t ur r ader t at t ey d ?
W en y u’ve c mpleted a other r vision, ve y ur e say t s meone e se—like a o f f i iend, o f f i mily
m mber, t h h l l o e acher, y p ur G AR U c ach ( r p eferably a l o t e a em ove). ve t em r ad i t
a d o fer c mments o h w b st t i prove i t
a . tting a d w g l de r nge o fe p rspectives c n b st r ally
u eful, d t d a ke t ese c itiques t h art a y u r vise a ain a ain—r d t d a ain—remember, iticism i n’t
p rsonal, ey’re j st t ying t h
