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PROSE
                                               Gina L. Mulligan - Historical Fiction Continued

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        FROM THE PRES                              After finishing a work, put      4.  Watch  out  for  first

                                                   it  aside  for  a  few  weeks,       person – Many agents  &

          GCW  has  had  excellent                 and  then  read  it  again  to       editors don’t like it.
          speakers  in  the  past.  But  our       see if it’s complete.            5.  Don’t  get  bogged  down

          speaker  for  March,  Gina               Editors work in layers.              with backstory.  Pick out
          Mulligan,  was  excellent.  She          Foreign  words  should  be           just  what’s  necessary  to

          was inspiring, informative and           in italics.                          move your story along.

          funny. Thank you, Margie Yee             End     paragraphs     and       6.  Anticipate     a     long
          Webb,  our  chairperson  in              chapters  with  lines  that          process.  Her  first  book

          charge    of   speakers,   for           draw the reader to the next          took 8 years to write.
          bringing her to GCW.                     line.                            7.  Edit out the history – not
                                                   Try  moving  your  last  line        necessary for the story.

          Many  members  are  divided              up  to  the  first  line  of  the   8.  Watch  for  Language.
          between  self-publishing  their          next section.                        Especially   watch    the

          book  and  using  an  agent  and         If using real people in your         dialogue.  Different  terms
          traditional  publishing.  The            story,   be   careful   to           should  be  explained  in

          speaker for the month of April           maintain  authenticity  in           context.
          is Jennifer Chen Tran. She is a          character.                       9.  Pacing,  Pacing,  Pacing
          literary  associate  agent  for          If you use real places, still        Hold  backstory  down.

          Fuse  Literary,  located  in  the        around be extra accurate.            Keep the story moving by
          Silicon  Valley.  Hopefully  she         When  in  doubt  about               ending  chapters  with  a

          will  shed  some  light  on  how         places     or     persons,           leading sentence.

          literary  agents  and  traditional       fictionalize them.               10. Enjoy  Whatever you do,
          publishers  work,  and  what             The    “Why”      is   often         enjoy your writing.
          services  they  have  to  offer          unknown,  but  it  is  what
          those  who  want  to  go  the            makes  or  breaks  your              Drop-In Resource

          traditional publishing route.            story.                                       People

                                                   Jstor.org – good historical
          The thoughts of spring:
                                                   Internet site.                   Starting  on  April  12,  and
          Spring  has  sprung  upon  us,       Mulligan’s 10 Hist. Fict. Rules      continuing    each    Drop-In
          bringing  all  the  flowers,  bees                                        Critique  day  we  will  have  club
          and  birds,  and  sometimes          1.  Sweat  the  small  stuff.        members  set  up  at  a  secluded

          humans,  in  full  pursuit  to           It’s  good  for  general         spot for members to receive help
          promulgate  the  species.  But           knowledge.                       on  specific  topics.    April  12th
                                                                                               Susan
                                                                                          be
                                                                                                        Korn
                                                                                    will
                                                                                                               on
          let’s  not  forget  the  greenish    2.  Keep  your  conscience           Mentoring.    April  26   will  be
                                                                                                        th

          yellow pollen, which torments            clean.  when  in  doubt,         Skip  Michael  on  Computer
          most      of    us.     Happy            fictionalize                     Formatting.    May  10   will  be
                                                                                                        th
          Spring….Achoo.  Don’t  forget        3.  Resist    judging    your        Michael  O’Haver  on  Computer

          to take your allergy medicine.           characters.  Research  the       Graphics.  If you are willing to
                                                   moral standards of the era.      volunteer, see a club officer.
          Skip Michael
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