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UNIVERSIDAD TÉCNICA DE AMBATO
ENGLISH WRITING
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NAME: MONSERRATH LASLUISA. DATE: October, 21 , 2017.
INTRODUCTION
Write a one paragraph composition about something you have accomplished.
1.- TOPIC
I HAVE TRIPED TO COLOMBIA.
2.- BRAINSTORMING
ATRACTIC PLACES SHOPPING CENTERS
TYPICAL FOOD HOTELS
3.- ORGANIZING
➢ TOPIC: I have triped to Colombia by first time because is a beautiful city for meet the attractive
places, shopping centers, hotels and their typical food.
➢ ATRACTIC PLACES: Infantil Park, Las Lajas Church.
➢ SHOPPING CENTERS: Alkosto, La Estrella, Exito.
➢ TYPICAL FOOD: Arepas, Bandeja Paisa.
➢ HOTELS: Las Vegas and Venecia.
4.- WRITING THE FIRST DRAFT
I HAVE TRIPED TO COLOMBIA
I have triped to Colombia by first time with my family because is a beautiful city for meet the attractive
places, shopping centers, hotels and their typical food. [When I traveled to Colombia was interesting
because met a new culture.]
The hotels are cheap an expensive. [I have been in two hotels “LA VEGAS” and “VENECIA” both were
beautiful and they had all the services.] The attractive places of the Colombia are beautiful and amazing.
[I have been in “Las Lajas Church” and the “Infantil Park” are very tourist places that the people visit.]
The shopping centers are very cheap as “ALKOSTO”, “EXITO”, “ ESTRELLA”,among others. [So, you can buy
differents articles such as: clothes, make up, food, electrodomestics,etc.]
The typical food in Colombia is delicious. [But I have tried a lot of local dishes.][My favorite was arepas
with coffee and the Bandeja Paisa food.] [Also their people is very friendly.] I liked to know another
country and visited different places.
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