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2. WRITING
Choose a strong sentence as your topic sentence.
Read the sentences you wrote, then choose the ones you like best and see if you can add more adjectives to make them more interesting.
Put your sentences in order.
You can end your essay with your personal opinion, how it makes you feel when you see it, why do you like it, etc.
3. REVISING
Check your work.
Does your description make sense?
Can the reader imagine what you are describing? Check your spelling.
Did you begin your sentences with a capital letter? Did you use the correct punctuation marks?
4. PUBLISHING
Read the description to the class, but show the painting at the end. Ask your classmates how they imagined the painting because of your description.
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