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An article written by Oxford Institute explains, “Students are so overwhelmed by
                  all the feedback that they either get demotivated and lose confidence.” It means that some
                  students think that feedback on academic writing is not important because knowledge is
                  in constant evolution, so is not important to remember old things. Personally, I think that
                  feedback  is  important  because  we  need  to  remind  necessary  things  like  grammar,
                  punctuation, and spelling on academic writing.

                         At  first,  feedback  on  academic  writing  should  be  necessary  because  it  is  an
                  effective method to remind important points of grammar structure. It helps people to write
                  an adequate essay without committing simple grammar mistakes. Moreover, it is well
                  known that the English language evolves, but it does not mean that old knowledge about
                  it is useless. Ancient knowledge is the basis for future knowledge.

                         Secondly,  another  important  thing  to  feedback  on  academic  writing  is  the
                  punctuation. According to Huisman, B. “Academic writing is affected by fatal errors in
                  punctuation.” It means that students tend to write essays without sense and it is because
                  they have forgotten important punctuation rules.

                         Thirdly,  some  investigations  have  demonstrated  another  important  error  in
                  academic writing is the spelling. Many students  have difficulties on spelling by long
                  periods without practice it. There are different routines which help to solve this failure.
                  For example, to make students read paragraphs and essays to recognize the spelling of
                  words.

                         In sum, feedback on academic writing should be mandatory for students at college
                  because it has benefits not only for the student but also for professors. “…I consider
                  academic writing is the basis for students’ knowledge.”
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