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UNIVERSIDAD TÉCNICA DE AMBATO
                     FACULTAD DE CIENCIAS HUMANAS Y DE LA EDUCACIÓN
                    CARRERA DE PADAGOGÍA EN LOS IDIOMAS NACIONALES
                                                 Y EXTRANJEROS
                                            SECOND SEMESTER “B”

                                               ENGLISH WRITING

                  Name: Paola Soto

                  Date: October 21, 2017


                                                PERFECT PARAGRAPH
                                                     CORRECTION



                      1.  Choosing a topic.

                        I won a silver medal in the tournament of swimming in Argentina



                      2.   Brainstorming


                      •  My team traveled to Argentina
                      •  Many rivals of different countries.
                      •  Good moments in the pool.

                      •  Come back to Quito
                      •  The trip was very tired.
                      •  The best swimmer in the tournament.

                      •  The hotel was fantastic.
                      •  Celebrated with my friends and my coach.

                      3.  General statements

                     •  My dream was go to the swimming tournament.
                     •  My team traveled to Argentina for the competition.
                     •  We had many good rivals in the tournament.

                     •  I was able to achieve the victory
                     •  I come back to Quito and my family were in the airport.
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