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No. Topic Question or response Comment Labels and
actions

12 3 45

12 My husband got up half an hour Husband = leaving –
before sunrise and photographed
the sun rise. He came back and
went off again for a walk.

Q Had you got up by that stage?

13 I was feeding the baby. I was Unsolicited denial … why did she Feeding

actually up and around the tent say she ‘didn’t go away from the The baby

but I didn’t go away from the tent?’ This means she was still

tent. in the tent when Michael came

back from his first walk. Did this

lead to an argument? Did Michael

criticize her?

Baby feed number 1 @ 8.00

No nappy change?

Q What time did your husband
return from his walk?

14 ⇑ The other half of that sentence Out of sequence

Back was that he was going for a walk When Michael returned for the

to photograph from another first time, she was in the tent?

direction near the rangers

residence. He probably returned to

the tent around eight.

Q Could you tell me what occurred
next?

15 I dressed the children and started She did this while Michael was Children

getting breakfast. I took the baby away. She had not finished Started

in the carry cot to the barbecue preparing breakfast when he Boys

stove with me, sat her on the seat returned and was possibly

while I was preparing breakfast. interrupted by him. Hence the use

She was in the carry cot. The boys of ‘started’

were playing in the area with me or

around me. .

16 Michael came back we had Michael back = ++

breakfast spent some time talking Other evidence shows that this

to the lady from Esperence, she lady is a Mrs West and that they

was using the other stove. had a conversation about the

danger of dingoes… OMMITTED

Q The area that you were camping
in, is that the same area that you
indicated to me earlier on the
map?