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No. Topic Question or response Comment Labels and
actions
12 34
63 5
Q Before I do that do you want a Responds to a question with a
64 description of what the baby was question. Why is it relevant? Backtrack
wrapped in? Prevarication before getting to
65 the critical issue?
66
Now if you like.
Q
67 Alright, she had a blue bunny rug Note this is not a description
which I had made plain blue on of her clothing … Simply the
Q one side with blue kittens and grey blankets … etc. There were no
balls of wool on a white background bloodstains on the blankets??
on the other side edged in blue This suggests there were four
satin ribbon wrapped next to the layers of blankets … later she
clothing. Then a pent house blanket says there were six
mulberry one side and a bright The baby must have been
pink the other edged in matching wrapped in this way when the
mulberry satin ribbon doubled man from Tasmania saw her
around her with a slightly smaller
matching blanket on the side the
wind was coming from.

She went to sleep in my arms while Michael = cooking ++
Michael and Aiden were finishing
cooking and eating their tea.

There was another young couple Husband = talking to woman –
from Tasmania with an eighteen
month old daughter cooking tea on
the other side. I sat on the railing
and talked to the husband while
my husband and his wife joined in
occasionally during the preparations
or while they were working. He was
drinking a stubby no wrong it was a
can in a stubby cooler.

What is a pent house blanket.

Its the brand of a double thickness
blanket which takes the place of
two ordinary blankets and may be
used in place of a bed spread, I had
bought a queen size bed one and
cut it down to make the smaller ones
myself.

Do you know the names of the
couple you were speaking to at the
barbecue area?