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Faculty of Engineering
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عم ةفيعض تارقف / ( Weak paragraphs with a correction template
) حيحصتلا جذومن
Paragraph 1 (Weak) )ةفيعض( 1 ةرقفلا)
The project was very good and the results were nice; we did an experiment and got some data,
but not all of it is clear.
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. ةحضاو اهلك شم سب تانايب ةيوش اهنم علطو ةبرجت انلمع انحا ،ةولح تناك جئاتنلاو ادج سيوك ناك عوشملا
Errors )ءاطخلأا(
(
• Non-scientific language )ةيملع يغ ةغل
• Colloquialisms )ةيماع تاملك(
• Lack of conceptual clarity )ةركفلا حوضو مدع(
Correction )حيحصتلا(
The experiment was conducted to gather data regarding system performance. While the results
yielded several positive indicators, certain data points require further analysis to ensure
their accuracy and validity.
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جاتحت تانايبلا ضعب نأ لاإ ،ةيباجيلإا تاشؤملا ضعب جئاتنلا ترهظأ .ماظنلا ءادأ لوح تانايب لىع لوصحلل ةبرجتلا ذيفنت مت
. اهتقد نامضل ليلحتلا نم ديزم لإ
Paragraph 2 (Weak) )ةفيعض( 2 ةرقفلا
The results were very large, very important, and all excellent.
. ةزاتمم اهلكو ادج ةمهمو ادج ة يبك تناك جئاتنلا
