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ENGLISH FOR ACADEMIC PURPOSES






                                 B.  Make  compound  sentences  by  adding  a  second  simple  sentence  to  each
                                     item.
                                     1.  My brother and I look like twins, but our personalities are very different.
                                     2.  We are both medium tall, and _______________________________
                                        _______________________________________________________
                                     3.  He is an extrovert, but _____________________________________
                                        _______________________________________________________
                                     4.  I am younger, so _________________________________________
                                        _______________________________________________________
                                     5.  Our mother used to tell us, “Stop fighting, or  __________________

                                        _______________________________________________________
                                     6.  We fought a lot as children, but now _________________________
                                        _______________________________________________________
                                     7.  We married two sisters, so _________________________________
                                        _______________________________________________________


               Two Sentence      Two  sentence  errors  that  writers  sometimes  make  are  run-ons  and  comma
               Errors:           splices. These mistakes happen most often when the two sentences are related
               Run-ons           in meaning.
               And Comma
                                     •  A run-on is two simple sentences incorrectly joined with no coordinating
               Splices
                                         conjunction and no comma.

                                          WRONG:     My  roommate  wants  to  win  the  Tour  de  France  someday  he
                                                     spends hours riding his bicycle.
                                          WRONG:     Write your signature on the line print your name below it.

                                     •  A comma splice is two simple sentences incorrectly joined with a comma
                                         alone.


                                          WRONG:     My  roommate  wants  to  win  the  Tour  de  France  someday,  he
                                                     spends hours riding his bicycle.
                                          WRONG:     Write your signature on the line, print your name below it.

                                 There are two ways to fix these errors.
                                     1.  Separate the sentences with a period.

                                          RIGHT:     My roommate wants to win the Tour de France someday.
                                                     He spends hours riding his bicycle.
                                          RIGHT:     Write your signature on the line. Print your name below it.



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