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ENGLISH FOR ACADEMIC PURPOSES

My grandfather will always seem young to me.

My brother will never grow up.

Step 3 Edit the first draft.
• First, read your paragraph to a classmate, and ask him or her to
complete Reader's Response lB on page 192. Write a second draft.
• Second, check your paragraph against Writer's Self-Check lB on page
193 to check your own paragraph. Revise your paragraph and write a
third draft if necessary.
Step 4 Write the final copy.
• Write a neat final copy of your paragraph to hand in to the teacher.
Your teacher may also ask you to hand in your prewriting and your

other drafts.

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