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looking at pretty Delma. She seemed nice








               enough. But her being here was creating a

               big havoc. And then she said to him.
               :



               “I think I will need help. My father will not be















               happy. But I want to see my mami and








               sisters. I need them to bring me my favorite



               dress. Today will be a very important day.









               To do this I will need your help, Cheito I









               need you to run to my parents’ house


               without papa seeing you.”







                                                                  Don Manuel had a feeling about this. He









               Now Cheito began to get nervous. He had            had seen Cundo coming around to say hello














               a feeling she would be asking help from            to Delmita. Once , Dona Rosa and Don




















               him, more than he would want to do.. And           Manuel had argued about this. He had told















               he wasn’t sure he was up to the task. He           his wife “:You need to keep a close eye on



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               knew he had to be a grown up to stay at            that girl! You know she is promised to Julio

















               Petrona’s and help his mom. But , he felt          in San Juan now that she is of age. He is












               now he was being asked to do much more             an old family friend. He went to look for















               than what his courage would allow.                 work and soon will come back. He can get









                                                                  her out of this town and find good work. Lots




                                                                  of damas, ladies,   need seamstress help
                                                                  over                                there.:”

               At Don Manuel’s

               Over at Don Manuel’s house it wasn’t much







               quieter.   Dona Rosa and her 2 daughters







               were alarmed when they didn’t see Delma







               at home. Don Manuel had left by horse to





               look around town and see if anyone knew










               anything. He went to Palmarejo, where his



               family lived, and find out. Dona Rosa was







               crying-Girls,   do   you   know   anything?
                      ​





               Delmitas sisters were very quiet. If they

               knew anything, they weren’t talking today.









                                                                  As he galloped on his horse and looked at


                                                                  the countryside,which had deep ravines,



                                                                  palm trees and plantain trees all in​“​Not an
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