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“I think I will need help. My father will not be happy. But I want to see my mami and sisters. I
need them to bring me my favorite dress. Today will be a very important day. To do this I will
need your help, Cheito I need you to run to my parents’ house without papa seeing you.”
Now Cheito began to get nervous. He had a feeling she would be asking help from him, more
than he would want to do.. And he wasn’t sure he was up to the task. He knew he had to be a
grown up to stay at Petrona’s and help his mom. But , he felt now he was being asked to do
much more than what his courage would allow.
At Don Manuel’s
Over at Don Manuel’s house it wasn’t much quieter. Dona Rosa and her 2 daughters were
alarmed when they didn’t see Delma at home. Don Manuel had left by horse to look around
town and see if anyone knew anything. He went to Palmarejo, where his family lived, and find
out. Dona Rosa was crying-Girls, do you know anything? Delmitas sisters were very quiet. If
they knew anything, they weren’t talking today.
Don Manuel had a feeling about this. He had seen Cundo coming around to say hello to
Delmita. Once , Dona Rosa and Don Manuel had argued about this. He had told his wife “:You
need to keep a close eye on that girl! You know she is promised to Julio in San Juan now that
she is of age. He is an old family friend. He went to look for work and soon will come back. He
can get her out of this town and find good work. Lots of damas, ladies, need seamstress help
over there.:”
As he galloped on his horse and looked at the countryside,which had deep ravines, palm trees
and plantain trees all in“Not an easy blessing ,intertwined in the hills, he breathed and said “
The Good Lord has blessed me with 3 daughters. he thought.
Dona Rosa and her daughters looked around Delmitas things. Nothing was missing except her
cartera, small purse, that she took out when she visited the plaza after Mass.. It was when the
town seemed to gather and rest from their hard labor, dress in their finest, and get updated on
the latest news. “ I saw her walking with Cundo last night,” said Mercedes, one of the sisters.
But we were all together. Later when I got home, I thought she was with you, Ana.” They all
looked at each other . Dona Rosa started to cry again.
The Quest