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REVISE AND EDIT Review your draft.

The revision and editing steps give you a chance to look carefully at your

writing and make changes. Work with a partner to determine whether you

have explained your ideas clearly to readers. Use these questions to help
you evaluate and improve your personal narrative.

PURPOSE/ ORGANIZATION EVIDENCE LANGUAGE/ CONVENTIONS
FOCUS VOCABULARY

Does my Do I tell what Did I include text Did I use signal Have I spelled all
narrative tell happened in a evidence about a words to show words correctly?
about a character clear order? character? the order of
who helped me? events? Have I used
Does the ending correct
Did I explain the show the Did I use punctuation?
problem the solution? descriptive words
character helped to show thoughts Did I include a
me solve? and feelings? variety of
sentence types?

PUBLISH Share your work.

Create a Finished Copy Make a final copy of your personal narrative. You

may want to include a photo or illustration. Consider these options to
share your narrative:

1 Bind your narrative together with those of your classmates to create

a Characters to Remember collection.

2 Work with classmates to share your narratives with another class. Read

aloud your narratives and respond to questions from the audience.

3 Record your narrative on video or audio. Practice until you can read
it fluently. Make the recording available for others to listen to.

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