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paragraph tells about the example of cyber bullying forms such as making
                       hurtful  comments  about  another  person,  spreading  rumors  or  lies  about

                       someone,  damaging  the  victim’s reputation  even  posting  embarrassing
                       photographs or videos of the victim without asking permission. Meanwhile,
                       in the last paragraph, this article discusses how some countries deals with
                       cyber bullying.

                           Secondly,  I  think  cyber-bullying  is  a  very  important  issue  in  today’s
                       world.  There  are  two  essential  factors  in  cyber-bullying,  technology  and
                       human behavior. Nowadays, it is not necessary for people to have face- to-

                       face interaction when they need something from the other. If they want to
                       express  their  feeling,  they  just  write  something  down  or  post  a  video  on
                       their  social  media.  Having  such  distance  interaction,  unfortunately,
                       decreasing the needs to see and receive direct reaction from the other party.

                       This, in my opinion, has been the reason why people nowadays are losing
                       their empathy when interacting through internet. One of the examples of
                       cyber  bullying  is  Amanda  Todd,  a  student,  who  committed  suicide  after
                       being bullied for her unpleasant video posted by her friends. Consequently,

                       it  is  important  for  all  parties  involved  to  raise  awareness  on  how  to  use
                       internet and social media wisely.
                           Lastly, as an active user of social media myself, this article has changed
                       my perspective. The data of the cyber-bullying that is presented in the article

                       makes me realize how serious this issue is. Perhaps, we feel like social media
                       provides us platform to show our thoughts. However, freedom of speech,
                       which  gives  the  right  to  express  opinions  without  restrain,  makes  people

                       tend  to  forget  that  there  should  be  limitation.  Personally,  I  have
                       encountered several examples of cyber-bullying on social media and in some
                       cases I felt like it was okay to have opinions on certain thing even when the
                       opinions given were vicious and attacking. However, this article has shown
                       me that it is important to understand the limitation in freedom of speech to

                       create healthy environment on social media for everyone.
                           In  conclusion,  aside  from  being  well-organized,  the  article  of  What  is
                       Cyber-Bullying?  is  relevant  in  today’s  world  and  is  able  to  change  my

                       perspective.  Although  this  is  a  short  article,  it  contains  compact
                       information.  However,  the  article  needs  more  data  about  cyber  bullying,
                       such  as  the  exact  number  of  cyber  bullying  case  taken  from  the  credible
                       sources.  The  data  will  increase  the  validity  level  of  this  article.  I  would

                       strongly  recommend  this  article  to  teenagers  and  students  to  make  them




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