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Matching the structure of a discursive essay : Introduction

Body 1

Body 2 Introduction Body 1

Body 2

On the one hand, education

On the other hand, can stop people from further Conclusion
Fast food has been

education alone will not proven to be the main damaging their health by

work. The fact is that many consuming fast food. From Conclusion
culprit of obesity and my view, although many eat

people who are aware of other diet-related fast food because of its

the consequences of All things considered,
diseases, however, the affordability, the root cause

eating junk food are lies in the fact that they are education is one viable
habit of eating an

unduly pessimistic. In not adequately educated solution to put a stop to
excessive amount of fast

other words, they are often about the danger of junk food the obesity epidemic,
food has never lost on health. According to recent

in denial and convince but it does not
momentum. One school studies conducted in the

themselves that unhealthy suffice. I feel that more
of thought holds that neighborhoods where fast

habits are not as terrible efforts should be made
education can rectify this food stores are easily

as the media want them to accessible, more than two- to combat obesity.
situation. However, there

believe. Secondly, it is quarters of the residents
is still much skepticism

very difficult for fast food know or care little about what
about the effect of

eaters to reduce their they are consuming and how
education. In this essay, it can affect their health.

dependency on fast food
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addictive artificial flavors.