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                         that the rhyming partners life –
 at long phrases        that the rhyming partners life –             - Elaborate on rhyming partners
                                                                     - Elaborate on rhyming partners
 though.                knife won't be heard often and               - Vowel sculpting
                         knife won't be heard often and
                                                                     - Vowel sculpting
  though.
                                                                     - Make it rhyme first
                         are therefore improbable or
                        are therefore improbable or                  - Make it rhyme first
                         unexpected.  The idea is to make
  n observation. I
 an observation. I      unexpected.  The idea is to make
 pting as in            it rhyme first, that is to choose            Remember that rhyming is not a
 pting as in
                         it rhyme first, that is to choose
                                                                     Remember that rhyming is not a
 e the end of  my
                                                                     must. And not every line has to
                         unexpected rhyme partners on
 e the end of  my       unexpected rhyme partners on                 must. And not every line has to
 d.  When I             purpose and still tell your story            be golden, especially if  you want
 d.  When I
                         purpose and still tell your story
                                                                     be golden, especially if  you want
                                                                     the core message, your hook, to
 't, let you go?”
                         with your values.  Consider for
 't, let you go?”       with your values.  Consider for              the core message, your hook, to
 ow).  Altering the  example ”Got a tattoo that said
                                                                     stand out in terms of  lyrics and
 ow).  Altering the  example ”Got a tattoo that said                 stand out in terms of  lyrics and
                                                                     not just melody-wise.
  vowels with an        'together through life'. Carved in           not just melody-wise.
  vowels with an
                         'together through life'. Carved in
 ole word (world –      your name with my pocket knife”
 ole word (world –
                         your name with my pocket knife”
 e sound of  words      (Coldplay Ink).  This technique              Alex is a German enthusiast and
                         (Coldplay Ink).  This technique
                                                                     Alex is a German enthusiast and
   sound of  words
  nd make them
                         requires logical twisting because
                                                                     late-bloomer who makes music to
 and make them          requires logical twisting because            late-bloomer who makes music to
                        you would have to pick the                   encourage some like-minded
                         you would have to pick the
                                                                     encourage some like-minded
                        rhyming partners first, and try to           souls.
                                                                     souls.
                         rhyming partners first, and try to
 with respect to        make them fit in one or two
 with respect to
                         make them fit in one or two
 nteresting is          sentences and at the same time               He is always open for
                         sentences and at the same time
                                                                     He is always open for
 nteresting is
 difficult.  As we      stick to your personal attitudes             collaboration.
 difficult.  As we
                                                                     collaboration.
                         stick to your personal attitudes
 hyme continuum         (using the knife against yourself
 hyme continuum
                         (using the knife against yourself
 ased on                and not others).                             https://soundcloud.com/alexande
                         and not others).
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 ased on
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 mply put, what         Four rhyming ideas:
 mply put, what
                         Four rhyming ideas:
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 expectable. Now
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 not going into         - Rhyme lexicon: avoid popular               nel/UC2LxRxAp9jXD_691qrenTJg
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 not going into
                         - Rhyme lexicon: avoid popular
 ut it's obvious          suggestions
                          suggestions
 ut it's obvious
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