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Individual Rewriting

               Remember that a habit description usually comprises three sections? They are an
               identification or introduction, a series of paragraphs describing the features of the subject,
               and a concluding paragraph. Now, read the text again Identify the sections and put section’
               name in column 1. Then identify the keywords and write them in the third column. Based on
               the keywords, rewrite the sentences.

            Structure                     Sentences                        Keywords             Rewriting
                         Today was a particularly hectic day
                         Thankfully, Rose was at home to assist me in
                         washing dishes, making quince jelly, and
         Orientation     caring for our newest family member, the

                         boy.
                         This was yet another ordinary day.

                         Jean came in after we completed our chores
                         and began enjoying the dinner we had just
                         prepared. Rose was tending to the child.
                         A heavy knock came at the entrance. I sat
                         there waiting for Jean or Rose to pass.
                         Jean sprang from his seat, knife and fork both
                         clutched in his hands. “Can’t a guy eat in
                         peace?” he exclaimed. “I’ve come to arrest
                         you Mr. Jean Clarkson for horse stealing,” a
                         deep voice said when Jean opened the bell. I
                         stood there watching Jean finish his last bite
                         of dinner.
                         He then told me that he was about to be
                         arrested. If there was no subpoena, I
                         informed him he didn’t have to go.
         Sequence of     I screamed at him, telling him he shouldn’t
         event           have let him in. Jean confidently said, “It’s all
                         right, Mum,” in an attempt to quiet me                 78
                         down.

                         The bread was taken out of the oven by me.

                         Jean ate the rest of his food from his bowl
                         with a large slice of thick bread. Constable
                         Fitzgerald was standing nearby. ‘I’ll just go
                         grab my jacket!” Jean said.
                         I chased after Jean, shouting at him for
                         letting him in when he shouldn’t have. Rose’s
                         screams could be heard
                         I dashed back to see what had happened.
                         Fitzgerald was bullying her, she explained.
                         I charged into the kitchen, grabbed the
                         shovel, and smacked him in the face. Jean
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