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FACULTAD DE CIENCIAS HUMANAS Y DE LA EDUCACION

WRITING II
Learning outcome: Three- level essay

NAME: AMANDA LOPEZ DATE: October 6th,2017
Write a Three-level paragraph about a kind of role model chosen by social group or

culture (150), write all the process use suitable transitions and vocabulary, grammar,
spelling, and punctuation.

Step 1: Brainstorming

My Grand Father
Darren Hayes

Lionel Messi
My friend Christopher

Step 2: Draft of a topic
Music cultures over the world

My role model is Darren Hayes

My role model is my friend Christopher
Step 3: make an outline

My role model is my friend Christopher who motivates others to follow their

dreams.
1) He learned about how to teach others to learn about their mistakes.

A.- He confronted difficult situations
* troubles

2) He is able to acquire his goals luckily,
A.- We live in a circle where we are judging others

3) Christopher's ability to be a team worker

A.- This gives to him the opportunity to get any job
Step 4: Write the first Draft

My role model is my friend Christopher who motivates others to follow their dreams.
I admire him because he had a hard life in his 27 years, he has a fighting spirit and ability to

get goals and also the ability to work in a team.