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Instruction: Write a three level paragraph about a kind of a role model chosen by a social
group or culture. Follow the steps:

Step 1: Brainstorming

- Bon Jovi was a great singer

- He belongs to Rasta Fari culture
- He wore clothes that made him special

- He was a good person

Step 2: Draft a topic sentence
Bon Jovi is considerate as a role model for the Rasta Fari culture for three main

reasons.

Step 3: Make an outline
Bon Jovi is considerate as a role model for the Rasta Fari culture for three main reasons.

I. He was a great singer
a. His songs have a beautiful meaning

b. He could transmit his feelings with songs
II. He was so especial

a. He wore unique clothes

b. His point of view of life was different
III. He was a good person

a. He was humble
b. He liked to share things

Step 4: First draft

Bon Jovi is considerate as a role model for the Rasta Fari culture for three

main reasons. He was a great singer. His songs have a beautiful meaning. He
could transmit his feelings with songs. He was so especial in some ways. He wore

unique clothes. His point of view of life was different. He was a good person. He
was humble despite he had a lot of money. He liked to share things with others.