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Wordiness











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                             Avoid wordiness in writing.









               Wordiness sometimes happens when writers do not take the time to

               be concise. The shortest and simplest way of expressing an idea is

               usually the best way.




               The following words and phrases contribute to wordiness and can

               usually be omitted:




                 actually         actually often unnecessary



                 basically        basically performs no function in most sentences


                 definitely       is definitely a space-waster



                 in my opinion    usually weakens a sentence in my opinion


                 really           not really necessary



                 the fact is      The fact is that Facts, like opinions, can usually be stated without
                 that             preamble
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