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UNIVERSIDAD TÉCNICA DE AMBATO
                            FACULTAD DE CIENCIAS HUMANAS Y DE LA EDUCACIÓN
                  CARRERA DE PADAGOGÍA EN LOS IDIOMAS NACIONALES Y EXTRANJEROS
                                               SECOND SEMESTER “B”

                                                  ENGLISH WRITING

               Name: Paola Soto

               Date: October 21, 2017

                                               PERFECT PARAGRAPH
                                                    CORRECTION

                   1.  Choosing a topic.

                        I won a silver medal in the tournament of swimming in Argentina

                   2.   Brainstorming


                   •  My team traveled to Argentina
                   •  Many rivals of different countries.
                   •  Good moments in the pool.

                   •  Come back to Quito
                   •  The trip was very tired.
                   •  The best swimmer in the tournament.
                   •  The hotel was fantastic.

                   •  Celebrated with my friends and my coach.

                   3.  General statements
                  •  My dream was go to the swimming tournament.

                  •  My team traveled to Argentina for the competition.
                  •  We had many good rivals in the tournament.
                  •  I was able to achieve the victory
                  •  I come back to Quito and my family were in the airport.
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