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II. Online videogames help to learn another language as English.

a. English
b. Guaraní
c. Catalan

III. Playing videogames makes to improve my brain skills.

a. Creativity.
b. Helps me in my perception and making decisions.

First draft
Online videogames

I enjoy playing any online videogame for three reasons. Online videogames are great to make
friends. I met many friends like my best friend and many Paraguayan friends. Online
videogames help to learn another language. Such as English, Guaraní, Catalan. Playing
videogames makes to improve my brain skills. That help me with creativity, perception and
making decisions.

Final draft
Why I love online videogames

I enjoy playing online videogames for three reasons. First, online videogames are great to

make friends because there are many people around the world playing it. I met my best friend

there and many Paraguayans friends in “GTA” a game usually played to versus among

different crews, but it is a history game. Second, online videogames help me to learn another

language as English, Guarani, Catalan because you can talk with players on the game.

Finally, online videogames make to improve my brain skills like creativity, perception and

making decisions. As you can see online videogames are not a bad influence for youth.

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