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The pollution around the word
The pollution around the word is caused because of various facts, but I am going to talk
about the three most important facts: Pollution the affects water, products that pollute,
felling of tree. First, the Pollution the affects water [is caused by the workers of enterprise
or industries that make things or food, since they throw the waste to the rivers. I think that
the manage should throe the waste in the established places and that they don’t
contaminated.] Second, there are more products that pollute the word. [The deodorant is
a product that not only pollutes, but also destroys the atmosphere. Also the bad use of
electricity has that the atmosphere it deteriorate.] Finally, the chopping of trees it’s
something that happens in all the word.[ I think that the president should plant two trees
per each chopped tree.] In conclusion, the pollution is a fact that affects us and with the
passed from time it will affect much more.
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Number the words: 154
