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My vacation was a goal that I wanted to do, it was really fantastic for two main

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reasons, I met touristic places and I did funny activities. I arrived to

Spain the first place that I met was the Church “La Sagrada Familia”. It is a

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beautiful place, and I felt really fascinated. I went with my family to

“Plaza España” specifically to “Mare Magnum”, it is a kind of Mall. It has shops to

buy clothes and souvenirs; Also there are discos to enjoy with friends.

Then I went to “Parc Catalunya”, it is a wonderful park and really big, it has a lot of

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green areas. I did some activities like skiing in sledge. I enjoyed of
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the wonderful views. I took a tour on a bus, and I could take a lot of

pictures. I tried a lot of typical food but I really liked the “Paella”. In concluding I

could enjoy a lot of my vacation with my family.

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Number of sentences: 11