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ESSAY:

Education has been an important aspect since many years. Not all people have the

opportunity to attend the university because they do not have enough money. Personally,

university education should be totally free. In this way, more people would have the chance to
go to the university, and free education could be a benefit.

Many people work instead of study, because they do not have enough money to go to the
university. However, if university education is free, more students will get the chance to go to

the university. [Many teenagers work and study at the same time, but if education were free,
they would let their jobs. Students could spend their time studying at the college. ]

Poor people usually do not have the opportunity to go to the university. Sometimes, they

do not finish the school or high school. However, free university education can be a benefit
for poor people. [They do not have to pay for books. Also, they could have the resources to

study at the university.]
As a conclusion, the government want to improve university education. Free education

would be beneficial for people that really want to attend university. The government should
try to give people totally free education because it will be a benefit for the country. Also, we

wouldn’t see unemployed people.

Details: Cause-effect, explanation

Type of conclusion: Opinion

Thesis statement:

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