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UNIVERSIDAD TÉCNICA DE AMBATO
FACULTAD CIENCIAS HUMANAS Y DE LA EDUCACIÓN
CARRERA DE IDIOMAS
WRITING II
CORRECTION

NAME: Michelle Pilatuña

• Write a three-level paragraph about a kind of a role model chosen by a social
group or culture.

STEP 1: BRAINSTORMING
• Bob Marley Rastafari
• Music messages

• Way to think

• Optimistic person
• Humble man

STEP 2: DRAFT A TOPIC SENTENCE

Bob Marley has influenced in many people and I think he is a role model for important
reasons.

STEP 3: MAKE AN OUTLINE
I. Music influenced a lot

A. Give people messages

B. Appreciate life
II. Optimistic person

A. Believe in people
B. Everything will be ok

III. Humble person
A. Modest

B. Help people

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