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Write a contrast essay about “Woman’s roles in two generations.”
First write a point by point or a side by side outline.
It is a side by side outline.

Women’s role in two generations.
Nowadays woman around the world are considerate part of the workforce, they usually have
important jobs. However, in the past women were abused and they did not work. Women’s
role have been changing during these years in different aspects for instance: in work, and in
education.

I. In work.

A. In the past, women were not allowed to have job nor a part time job.
B. Today, women assign jobs and manage enterprises.

II. In education.

A. Women did not know how to write or speak in a correct way because men
considerate women have to stay at home with children as housekeepers.
B. Today, men take care of children because women work.

Essay.
Women’s role in two generations.

Nowadays woman around the world are considerate part of the workforce, they usually

have important jobs. However, in the past women were abused and they did not work.

Women’s role have been changing during these years in different aspects for instance: in
work, and in education.

One aspect where women’s role have been changing is in work. Women were considerate

weak because they did not have big muscles as men, so women were slaves of men. In
contrast, today women assign jobs and manage enterprises because the world realized the

real force comes from the willing of doing things.

The last aspect which women’s role have been changing is related with education. Years

ago, women did not know how to write or speak well because men believed the place of a

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