Page 2 - english writing- paragraph. Israel pillaga

Writing the first draft:

To improve the way to learn a new language, I improved parts in my way of

studying. I choose the language I want to learn. I really like to learn that
language. Choose the best way to learn the language. To know if I am better
at learning by listening or in some other way. I always understand better by

listening, I learn better if I always listen to music in that language. I'm not very
good at expressing myself.

Final draft:

To improve the way to learn a new language, I improved parts in my way of
studying. First I choose the language I want to learn, I must think well if it will

serve me or if I will do it just for pleasure. Second I choose the best way to
learn the language, it can be taking classes apart or studying on my own. After
that to know if I am better at learning by listening or in some other way like

writing or repeating the words. In addition, I always understand better by
listening. As a final fact, I'm not very good expressing myself because I always
get nervous and I miss all my ideas, but I always try to improve my vocabulary
and trust in myself and in what I say.

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