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A.  Students with low incomes can access education.

                     B.  As it is free, learners do not have the necessity of education loans.
                     C.  Free education allows students to focus more their studies.

                  II. Proponents of paid tuition clam that a free one might carry negative consequences.
                      A.  Full classrooms.

                      B.  People who do not want to study.
                      C.  It may be not a good education quality.

                  III.  There are alternatives for people who might not want to pay tuition.

                      A.  Distance classes are paid but are usually cheaper than college’s tuition.
                      B.  Online classes often are free.


                  Essay.


                      A formation establishment with free tuition means that students do not have to pay
                  for their education. Regarding a high level education, college or university, those usually

                  require their students to pay each semester for the services. So that, I would say that
                  college or university education with free tuition is beneficial for some reasons.



                      Firstly,  a  free  tuition  provides  benefits  for  students  who  want  a  high-level
                  preparation.  [For example, students with low incomes can access education]. There are

                  many people that, because they do not have enough money, they do not study even when   Explanatio
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                  they like to.  [In addition, if education tuition were free, students would focus more].

                  Usually students get worried because they have to pay their education, so they do not

                  concentrate. [A final thing is that learners could be loans free]. The amount of money for   Fact
                  paying education is high usually, so they get loans. As it would be free, they do not have

                  to worry about debts.                                              Cause and effect reasoning


                      On  the  other  hand,  proponents  of  paid  tuition  clam  that  a  free  one  might  carry
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                  negative  consequences.  [As  it  is  free,  more  people  access  education  resulting  in  full  n

                  classrooms]. This is not a proper environment to learn. [Also, there could be students who

                  do  not  want  to  learn].  In  fact,  those  students  often  forced  by  their  parents  so  their
                  performance is not good. [A final negative thing is that education quality may not be

                  good]. As it is free, it might not be as good as a paid education.
                                                                                     Cause and effect reasoning




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