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                  In my opinion, university students are more productive when the tuition is free.
                  However, it is a better idea establish some rules for students.
                    I.   Everybody can study and get a degree
                             A.  Students should not be worried about tuition.
                             B.  Poor people can have the same opportunities than others.
                   II.   Students can save money
                             A.  They can use it to buy texts or made projects.
                   III.   Free tuition help to increase the rate of educated people.
                             B.  A country could have good professionals.
                             C.  It helps to improve developing countries.


                  Write the essay

                                          University education without tuition



                           Free tuition is when students should not pay to study at university or colleges. In
                  my opinion, university students are more productive when the tuition is free. It gives

                  many advantages for both students and society. However, It is a good idea universities

                  establish some rules to avoid students fail the subjects.

                           One  benefit  of  free  education,  is  that  everybody  can  study  and  get  a  degree.

                  University students will not be worried about how to pay the tuition. Some years ago,
                  students has to work to pay their education. It was difficult and affected their studies.

                  Because of it, free tuition gives poor people more opportunities. On the other hand, there

                  are some students that fail subjects because they think to repeat a course many times
                  without paying tuition.


                           Another benefit is that students can save money. Students can keep their money to
                  buy books or make projects. However, some of them waste the money in unnecessary

                  things as video games. Also, they use it to go out with friends and drink alcohol.

                           The last benefit, is that free education help to increase the rate of educated people.

                  It means an improvement to developing countries. Furthermore, it helps to create a good

                  competition between students. Because of it, a country can have good professionals with
                  the knowledge in specific areas.


                           As a conclusion, I can say that university free tuition could give money benefits.
                  Because of it, people should encourage it. They should think about benefits to society.
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