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Outline:
               In my opinion, university students are more productive when the tuition is free. However, it is

               a better idea establish some rules for students.

                  I.   Everybody can study and get a degree
                          A.  Students should not be worried about tuition.

                          B.  Poor people can have the same opportunities than others.
                 II.   Students can save money

                          A.  They can use it to buy texts or made projects.

                III.   Free tuition help to increase the rate of educated people.
                          B.  A country could have good professionals.

                          C.  It helps to improve developing countries.



               Write the essay

                                          University education without tuition


                        Free tuition is when students should not pay to study at university or colleges. In my
               opinion,  university  students  are  more  productive  when  the  tuition  is  free.  It  gives  many

               advantages for both students and society. However, It is a good idea universities establish some
               rules to avoid students fail the subjects.

                        One benefit of free education, is that everybody can study and get a degree. University

               students will not be worried about how to pay the tuition. Some years ago, students has to work
               to pay their education. It was difficult and affected their studies. Because of it, free tuition gives

               poor people more opportunities. On the other hand, there are some students that fail subjects
               because they think to repeat a course many times without paying tuition.

                        Another benefit is that students can save money. Students can keep their money to buy
               books or make projects. However, some of them waste the money in unnecessary things as

               video games. Also, they use it to go out with friends and drink alcohol.

                        The last benefit, is that free education help to increase the rate of educated people. It
               means  an  improvement  to  developing  countries.  Furthermore,  it  helps  to  create  a  good

               competition between students. Because of it, a country can have good professionals with the

               knowledge in specific areas.
                        As a conclusion, I can say that university free tuition could give money benefits. Because

               of it, people should encourage it. They should think about benefits to society.
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