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                       The real world moves forward with money, if money is missing things don`t work out. In
               the case of young people when high school students graduate they have to take a big step entering
               university. There are many university that are tuition free, but are overshadowed by the prestige
               ones. I believe collage or universities shouldn`t be tuition free because the education quality
               will diminish, people that enter would be there on obligation, and lastly people will improve
               many aspects that will help them throughout their lives.

                       There are many institutions that offer free higher education, but since there budget is low
               students lose on many opportunities to show their full potential. [In prestigious universities they
               offer many opportunities like programs that will allow students to gain more knowledge in
               the long run.] Having free Universities will diminish the quality of education a student can
               get from those with tuition.

                       The change high school graduates go through when they enter a university is big. [Many
               students  who  enter  universities  aren’t  there  because  of  their  free  will]  This  can  happen
               because some universities are free so society obligates students to enter even though they may
               not want to. Having institutions with tuition will eliminate this and will aid to only have students
               who really want to study.

                       Universities that are tuition free not do they only offer better education quality and shaped
               better professionals but [they also teach many value aspects that will aid them throughout
               their entire life.] Students learn to became more responsible and they start to manage their
               money better.  Among other things they value things in life better and don’t take them for granted.

                       To sum up, universities with tuition offer more opportunities, that will aid students
               to  move  forward  in  life  more  easily.  Having  students  that  are  studying  because  they  feel
               obligation would translate into very poorly professionals that one day will do half of the job. In
               our society we need to shape better professionals with life lesson attributes that will contribute to
               our world.


                       Type of details: Cause and effect reasoning

                       Words: 340

               * Topic Sentence
               * General Statement 1
               * Examples GS1
               * General Statement 2
               * Examples GS2
               * General Statement 3
               * Examples GS3
               * Concluding Sentence
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