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Some Notes:


                   •  The sections that I have written are all in need of more info.


                   •  Except for the opening paragraph the other sections could be placed

                       in whatever order you would like.  Plus, we have many more chapters

                       to add. I just wanted you to see the direction this is going in and get
                       your feedback.  There are some questions within the pages, and photo

                       request all in red, so if you can clarify those points, it would be
                       awesome.  I am hoping we can talk again when you feel better so we

                       can fill in a bunch of missing facts.  I do however think we are on the

                       right track. Let me know your thoughts.






                   •  The photos I placed are all low-resolution shots.  If you have actual
                       photos to replace these, it would be better as these won't print as well

                       as high-resolution images.  I used them basically for placement.






                   •  I've searched everywhere I can think of to find the report of Robert's
                       crash, as I didn't want to make you relive the details, but I was

                       unable to find anything.  So, if you wouldn't mind the account of his

                       crash could use some additional info if you feel you can open up about
                       it for the book.






                   •  There is no mention in the book of Scott.  Was he involved with the

                       airport?  Are you close to him?  I don't want to leave him out unless
                       you want to.  Let me know.
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