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These are just a few of the sentence variations you can
use.XX

USING THE CHECKLIST
◆ Remember to use commas in the correct places when
more than one clause is used.

◆ Always check your work.

◆ Avoid unnecessary repetition and tautologies.

◆ Check spellings of frequently misspelled words.
◆ Vary your sentence structure.

◆ Avoid the use of jargon.

◆ Clichés are frequently used phrases. Avoid them.

◆ A simile is a comparison using ‘like’ or ‘as’.

◆ A metaphor is an implied comparison without the use of
‘like’ or ‘as’.

◆ Personification gives human characteristics to things that
are not human.

◆ Use similes and metaphors to ‘colour’ your language.

◆ Delete unnecessary words.

PRACTISING WHAT YOU’VE LEARNT
1. Correct the following:
(a) The school are hoping to raise enough money to build a
new drama studio.