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Outline

Over the years, a lot of people migrate to others countries

to improve their lifes in many ways. The two most important

reasons are to have a new life and to search new
opportunities. (T.S)

I. People want a new life (S.P)

A. Want to change their life perspectives.
B. Search for a new life.

C. Want to meet new people/places.
II. Others countries offer new opportunities (S.P)

A. More jobs demands.

B. A better level of education.
C. More technology.

Final Draft

Over the years, a lot of people migrate to others countries to

improve their lives in many ways. The two most important

reasons are to have a new life and to find new opportunities.

One reason is that people want a new life. Most of them want

to change their life perspectives. This is because some of them
want to forget about bad experiences in their own countries. For

this reason, people want to achieve new goals. Also, people want
to find a better life. They think that by migration they could

improve their lives. Also, they want to change their bad habits

too. In addition, migrants meet new people and with this new
places too. Meeting new people allow them to lend the bad

friends that can affect their lives in negative ways. Also, by