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during the week because she has to check the test of her students. Then, [she must

                         have done her things quickly] because she forgets her things, she couldn’t have
                         completed. Second, she needs to study a lot to give classes all day, so [she must

                         have taken courses to improve her skills], and [she needs to prepare the classes all
                         day] because she gives classes, and she can’t arrive without preparation. Also, [she

                         needs to continue study to renovate her knowledge] because the theories are
                         constantly renovated. Third, this job makes her a better person, so [she prepares her

                         things on time] because she needs to do some things. Also, [she wakes up earlier],

                         so she goes to bed earlier, and prepare her things very quickly last day, and [she
                         treats her co-workers with respect], so she says “thanks”, “please”, and some words

                         to demonstrate respect. In conclusion, this job is very hard, but she loves this.

                  Step 5: Identify the parts of a paragraph.


                  Topic sentence. __________________________

                  General statement.==================

                  Details []
                  Concluding sentence …………………………...

                  Transitions………………….

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