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Evidence for Element 2

                                            Universidad Técnica de Ambato

                                   Facultad de Ciencias Humanas y de la Educación
                                  Pedagogía de los Idiomas Nacionales y Extranjeros

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               Name: Tatiana Inca                                       Date: November 12  ,2017
                                                    English Writing
               Instructions:

               Write a one paragraph composition that describes qualitis of a place or event(150 words)
               Follow the steps.

               Step 1: Make a list of possible topics. Choose a topic
               Place                                      Event

                     Montalvo’s park                            Baños cantonization party

                     Cementary                           Colada Morada in my house


               Step 2: Make a cluster

                     concerts                                                               Statues



                                                                                     Things
                             Events                 Montalvo’s park
                             B  a  ñ  o  s     p  a  r  k  s


                     Dancing                                                                Games


               Step 3: Write a topic sentences
               Baños is a very touristic town because it has many parks and one of the most important park
               is Montalvo’s park.Thus Montalvo’s park has many events and interesting things.
               Step 4: Write a paragraph
               Baños is a very touristic town because it has many parks and one of the most important park
               is  Montalvo’s  park.  Thus  Montalvo’s  park  has  many  events  and  interesting  things.  First,
               every weekend in Montalvo’s park there are many amazing events such as music concerts
               and modern dancing. For example, [ the music concerts are different because in this city there
               are many foreigners], too. They play piano or guitar. Furthermore, [the modern dancing is
               amazing and fantastic because the people perform this professionally].  Also, this park has
               many fantastic things such as statues of illustrious people and many funny games. [The Juan
               Montalvo statue is located in this park because Juan Montalvo went to the park to read
               and write]. Finally, it has many funny games where the people play soccer or basketball
               with their family. In this park they can be funny and relaxing for their family.
               Step 5: Identify the parts of a paragraph.


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