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1. Topic: My holidays in Orlando
2. Brainstorming:

- Intersting activities

- Universal Orlando re’s Islands of Adventure
- Family
- Souvenirs

- New places
- Airplane

- Food
3. Outline:

Topic Sentence
My Holidays in Orlando it was really amazing, for two main reasons. , I met touristic places and

I did interesting activities.
General Statements.
I: meet touristic places

- Universal Orlando Resort
- Aquatica

II: interesting activities
- Go shopping
- Try a different food

4. First Draft

My holidays in Orlando it was really amazing, for two main reasons. I met touristic places and I
did interesting activities. First, Orlando is a tourist place you can go to a lot of resort theme
parks, for example Universal Orlando Resort, in this park you can enjoy of two parks, Univesal

Studios Florida and Universal’s Island of Adventure. The first is about famous movies as
Madagascar, Revenge of the mummy, Harry Potter, this one is my favorite. Universal’s Islands

of Adventure, is an exploration trip, where visitors leave a main port to visit eight "islands", each
with its own theme, but always emphasizing the adventure. Then, I went with my family to
“Aquatica”, the park is themed to the southern Pacific, it was a really awesome expirience. Also,

I did some interesting activities like go shopping in Outlets. I enjoyed shopping a lot of clothes
and souvenirs for my friends. Finally, I tried food, but I didn’t like it, it’s very different from the
food of our country. In concluding I could enjoy a lot of my holiday with my family.

Number of words: 183
Number of sentences: 12