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EVIDENCE FOR ELEMENT 1

Instruction: Write a three level paragraph about a social group or culture (150
words)
Step 1: Brainstorming.
 Help to other people
 Try to solve problems
 Search improvement for everybody
 Small group in my town

Step 2: Draft a topic sentence.
I would like to choose “Caritas” as my role model group for some reasons.
Step 3: Make an outline (clauster or linear).
I. Help to other people
 Food, materials
 conferences
II. Try to solve problems
 Government
 Good life for everybody

Step 4: Frist draft (Identified topic sentence, general statements and concluding
sentences).
“Caritas” is a foundation in my city that offer help to people. I would like to choose
them as a good group role model for some reasons. First, they help to affected

people when people have suffered a damage. They usually help them in an
emergency situation. Second they try to solve problems. When they find a big

problem that they cannot solve by themselves they search another solution with

another bigger institution. As a conclusion, I can say that “Caritas” is a good
group role model of generosity and charity.

Step 5: Final draft (Identified topic sentence, general statements and concluding
sentences)

“CARITAS” – ROLE MODEL
“Caritas” is a foundation in my city that offer help to people. In this group there are
people between 15 – 40 years old that want to build a better world. For this

reason, I would like to choose them as a good group role model because they

help in different ways. First, they help to affected people when people have
suffered a damage. They usually help them in an emergency situation such as, an

earthquake, eruption, landslide and others. They collect food, water and clothes
to give affected people. Second they try to solve problems like schools without

basic sources, communities, and others. Although when they find a big problem
that they cannot solve by themselves they try to look another solution with

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