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II. Legal representatives
A. Some areas child labor is culturally accepted and valued.
B. The real problem is that child labor is not an opportune part of the productive
system.
C. The use of child labor is of interest to many employers.

Infantile work

Insufficient family income converts children into necessary labor. First, the situation of
many families without this input from children would be unsustainable. (Thus, child
labor becomes a very important part of the economic sphere and its immediate demise
would put serious problems not only for families but also for the economies of many
areas. Their work is necessary for their own subsistence and that of their families and
although the ideal is that activities cease). Second, legal representatives of our country
ask that three basic objectives be met: 1. (That is compatible with the school. 2. That
they have good conditions of safety and hygiene. 3. That all exploitation ends. In
addition, in some areas child labor is culturally accepted and valued, those who
consider that they acquire knowledge, learn to assume responsibilities, integrate
themselves socially in their community, etc. The established norms do not oppose if
this work is appropriate to their age and maturity. The real problem is that child labor
is not an opportune part of the productive system but is an important element in the
expansion of the market economy). Finally, the use of child labor is of interest to many
employers because wages are lower, more manageable than adults and more
vulnerable to threats. In conclusion, the majority of working children are part of an
informal, family labor market limited to the local environment, resulting in their
invisibility to the legal frameworks that protect the rest of the workers.

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IV. General Statements
d) Supporting Details
V. General Statements
e) Supporting Details
VI. General Statements
f) Supporting Details