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Write an opinión paragraph about pollution.
Problems Solutions
Disease More medicines
Traffic pollution Avoid cars
Industries pollution Close the less important industries
Write the topic sentence.
The biggest cities should avoid producing pollution and take care of environment.
Outline.
The biggest cities should avoid producing pollution and take care of environment.
I.- the cities generate a lot of pollution because of the cars.
-If people can walk to go for their destination, people must do it.
II. If the people avoid driving their cars, the air will be cleaner
- The people can go walking or cycling
- Go walking is more accessible
III. Avoiding cars and closing some industries, the life of people would be healthier.
- The diseases will not increase
- The way of transportation will be easier
Paragraph.
The biggest cities should avoid producing pollution and take care of environment. First, the
cities generate a lot of pollution because of the cars, so if the people can walk for their
destinations, they can or must do it. Second, if people avoid driving their cars, the air will
be cleaner, they can’t lost money that is not necessary to lost. Finally, avoiding cars and
closing unnecessary industries, the life of people will be healthier, the diseases will not
increase and the way of transportation will be easier because the cars are less; the accidents
won’t happened and it will be more respect between the people and who are in the city.
In conclusion, I think that we must avoid the pollution, because all of us have a unique home
and we have to take care of it.
Topic sentence: ___________ Concluding sentence: .
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