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Writing

A description

• I can write a description.

1 2.24 Read and listen. Answer the questions.
1 What is Molly’s favourite room?

2 Has she got her own room?

3 What is there in her room?
4 What does she usually do in there?

My favourite room
My favourite room is my bedroom. When I was little, we lived in a small flat. Now I’ve got
my own room because our new flat has got four bedrooms. I love it!

I’ve got the usual things in my bedroom such as a big desk, a green chair and an enormous
wardrobe. I've also got fantastic posters on the wall. My favourite piece of furniture is my
bed of course. I often sit in my bedroom and / listen to music. I also read magazines.

What’s your favourite room in your house?

3 In 40-60 words, write about your favourite
room. Follow these steps.

Language Writing a description

adjectives Step 1 Plan
Use adjectives in your writing to give
Make notes under three headings:
more description:
1 What is your favourite room?
E.g. We lived in a small flat. 2 What is there in this room?
... a big desk, a green chair, an enormous wardrobe ...
3 What do you usually do there?
I've also got fantastic posters on the wall.
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Step 2 Write

Write a first draft. Organise your writing
2 Rewrite these sentences using

into three paragraphs. Use your notes
the adjectives in brackets. from Step 1 and the description on this
page to help you.
E.g. When I was little, we lived in a house. (big)
When I was little, I lived in a big house.
Step 3 Check
1 In my bedroom, there's a desk and a chair.
(brown / plastic) Check your work. Try to include
some adjectives.
2 I've also got two lamps. (small)
3 There are two bookcases. (white)

4 I often listen to music in my room. (pop) Step 4 Write
Write your final copy and hand in
5 My favourite thing is my bed. (comfortable)
your work.

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