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Pollution in Quito

Pollution in Quito is Very dangerous for three reasons. First, Pollution in Machangara river.
This river is the most polluted, because most people industries, and hospitals throw trash.
The municipality must control this problem with the citizens. Second, the smog of cars. The
smog causes serious problems in the health, for example: asthma and bronchitis. These
diseases affect children and adults. Also, there many cars. The municipality can reduce the
numbers of cars in the streets. Finally, Pollution in the floor. Farmers uses a lot of pesticides
in his crops. These pesticides affect a lot of people, because when the people buy this crops
can get sick. In conclusion, the pollution in Quito is major than any other place- the
government of Ecuador and municipality of Quito must Work together to stop all ways of
pollution.

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