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 Know about other cultures

7. Write the first draft

I love to travel to another countries to have fun or only visiting, but in
this time I ill ant to go out in order to get my master degree. This is one of the

most important achieves in my life. I try to follow some steps. First, I want to
finish my career, for that I’m going to study hard, also y try to high my grades
during my college stage. Second, I want to find a job as a teacher or as a
translator with a good salary in order to have a good economy. Then I will earn
money to continue traveling for fun. Finally hen I achieve some of those steps I
ill travel to Australia or United Kingdom to continue with my studies. Also if a
have the opportunity does my master degree in those countries.

Write the final draft with

I love to travel to other countries to have fun or only visiting, but in this time I
will want to go out in order to get my master degree. This is one of the most important
achieves in my life. I try to follow some steps. First, I want to finish my career, for that
I’m going to study hard, also y try to high my grades during my college stage. Second, I
want to find a job as a teacher or as a translator with a good salary in order to have a
good economy. Then I will earn money to continue traveling for fun. Finally hen I
achieve some of those steps I ill travel to Australia or United Kingdom to continue with

my studies. Also if a have the opportunity does my master degree in those countries.