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4.- First Draft
Watching Movies
Listen to music the best pastime for three reasons. It’s interesting
because I can learn about different topics. Listen foreign music I learn ne
vocabulary, I have learned about different cultures and lifestyles from
other countries. It’s a good way to learn about history. Listen to music
amuse me when I’m boring. Listen to music fun me and relax me I think
music is a good topic to discuss. We liked to discuss with our opinions
about it. Then, I would like to write my conclusion on my personal diary
about what I learned. That’s why for me listen to music is the best
pastime.
5. - Final Draft:
Listen to music
Listen to music the best pastime for three reasons. It’s interesting
because I can learn about different topics. Listen foreign music I learn ne
vocabulary, I have learned about different cultures and lifestyles from
other countries. It’s a good way to learn about history. Listen to music
amuse me when I’m boring. Listen to music fun me and relax me I think
music is a good topic to discuss. We liked to discuss with our opinions
about it. Then, I would like to write my conclusion on my personal diary
about what I learned. That’s why for me listen to music is the best
pastime.
