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Body Paragraph 2

                  Point (topic sentence): It could be too much government intervention in people personal lives.

                  Evidence: people is able to spend their money as they wish.

                  Explanation: they are mature enough

                  Link (transition): However people under age 18 do not know their rights and responsibilities.

                  Evidence: although they can get alcohol, tobacco, they can get energy drinks easily

                  Explanation: It’s a worrying part because they are trying to protect the next generation.

                  Link: politicians should work to preserve teenager’s health.


                                                 Concluding Paragraph
                  Restate thesis: It is important to approve a law.

                  Restate body paragraph 1’s main idea: Finding options to get drinking energy drinks.


                  Restate body paragraph 2’s main idea: Encouraging teenagers care their health.

                  Leave the reader with something insightful about your topic:



























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