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b. When my grandfather died, she was very sad but she knew that she had to overcome

that difficult moment. One consequence was that she decided to buy some land to
cultivate flowers.

c. In each holiday or date special my grandmother looks the way that the whole family
meet and share moments together and do not lose contact with us.

5. Add linkers:
a. First, my grandmother is a sincere person because she says everything that she thinks

directly.
b. Second, she is persistent because she works very hard to achieve her goals despite her

age.

d. Finally, she is devoted to her family because she always is aware that everybody is
fine.

6. Use subordinating conjunctions:

Subordinating conjunctions

7. First draft:

My role model is my grandmother Lola, because she is sincere, persistent and
devoted to the family. First, my grandmother is a sincere person because she says

everything that she thinks directly. I remember when my grandmother knew that my
grandfather had cancer, but he did not want to say it to the family. So, my

grandmother knew that information was important and she told us the true. Second,
she is persistent because she works very hard to achieve her goals despite her age.

When my grandfather died, she was very sad, but she knew that she had to overcome

that difficult moment. One consequence was that she decided to buy some land to
cultivate flowers. Finally, she is devoted to her family because she is always aware

that everybody is fine. For example, in each holiday or date special my grandmother

looks the way that the whole family meet and share moments together and do not lose
contact with us.