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Essay

Step 1 Brainstorming

-Understand the problema of the society

-Never give up

-Work with effort in hard situations
-Have perspectives and ideals

Step 2 Draft a topic sentence

In the life we can choose a ideal role model , because this role model can help us to
understand the problema of the society .

Step 3 Make a outline

In the life we can choose a ideal role model , because this role model can help us to
understand the problema of the society and try to find any solution.

1.- Have goals in the life

1.1 – Never give up
1.2 – Work with effort and dedication

2.- Try to have more empaty with other people

2.1- Work in teams to find the solution for the problems.
2.2- Change perspectives and have ideals .

Step 4 First draft

Ideal role model by social group

In the life we can choose a ideal role model , because this role model can help us to
understand the problems of the society and try to find any solution. In my life I choose a
role model for several reasons .First , a role model help me have goals in my life and work
with effort. Second, try to have more empathy with other people to work in teams . In
conclusión have a role model change many thing in your life and you will become a new
person with ideals and with new goals .