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Step 4: Outline.

Thesis Statement: University education should be free for several reasons.

Topic Sentence 1: There are a lot of people who don’t have money to pay a tuition.

• Tuitions are usually exaggerated.
• There are extra expenses as transportation, food, and attachments.
• Books are expensive.

Topic Sentence 2: The government should help universities with money in order to
students don’t have to pay.

• Government can help universities by taxes that everyone pays.
• Education is something necessary in order to the country grows up.
• Most of the time, the money of tuition is used for other things that don’t have
relation with the university.

Step 5: Final Draft:

Should university education be tuition free?

Tuition is an amount of money that students must pay every semester to attend to
classes at university. It is a fact that universities need a lot of money to improve their

services, but there are many people that don’t have money to pay the tuition. I think that
university education should be tuition free in order to everyone can study. It could be

possible with government’s help.

It is known that universities need money to satisfy their necessities such as

improve infrastructure, hire personnel, and buy furniture; but also, there are a lot of people
who don’t have money to pay the tuition. [Each semester, students must pay an exaggerate

amount of money] besides that [there are extra expenses as transportation, food, and
photocopies.] Moreover, [the books that are required are also expensive.] [All of these

reasons mate it impossible that poor people can study at university.]

In fact, the government cannot help all the universities because it has priorities

and there isn’t enough money for everyone, but the government must have a budget only
for education in order to help universities. [Taxes can help universities and reduce the

amount of tuitions.] Something important is that [education is necessary for the country

to grow up, so the government should invest on universities.] Furthermore, [most of the
time tuition’s money is used for other things that don’t have relation with the university,

so it should be banned.]